Onus

Age/Gender: 25, Male
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I will never make flash animation. I am purely a critical third party critique for scrutiny and hopefully guidance. Please do not try and offer me advice on flash - I do not want it nor need it. Thus Spoke Zarathustra.

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8/26/03

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Exp. Points: 330 / 400
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Voting Pow.: 4.66 votes

BBS Posts: 39 (0.02 per day)
Flash Reviews: 134
Music Reviews: 0
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Score: 7
Aerial Gunning

"Good idea"

submission: Aerial Gunning
date: May 28, 2008

I like where you were going with this. It's an interesting and skillful presentation of the program. They kill much more coyotes than anything and wolves have only recently been inclining. This is also dangeorus for the pilots. I do not think anyone wants this program to continue. Good way to raise awareness. My rating is mostly based on the awareness reach.
~

December 22, 2008

Author's Response:

why thank you very much. I think your score is pretty fair ^^ It was the type of score I was expecting when I first submitted...not all these 10's...xD not that I'm complaining.

But thanks a bunch. And sorry for the late reply.

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Score: 4
kakuzu's talent

"Hm, needs more"

submission: kakuzu's talent
date: May 28, 2008

Being thrown into something is always awkward. Try adding an intro an maybe an ending? This gives a good overall what's going on and finish to the idea. Good potential, juts fulfill it.
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Score: 10
Blood Static

"Awesome"

submission: Blood Static
date: May 14, 2008

Best stick animation I have ever seen. Most original and unique. Did you do all the voices?
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Score: 8
Tywo At Large Ep. #2

"Good"

date: May 13, 2008

I simply want to say well done.
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Score: 2
Snakehasbetterthingstodo

"Meh"

date: May 13, 2008

In progress? This could be pretty funny if you go fully into it. Why not? Keep the voices consistent. Even though no one can do Snake's voice besides David Hayter, it's always funny to hear people impersonate him - so when you finish it, add it in! :D
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Score: 2
DBZ-PE 2.1

"Not just him"

submission: DBZ-PE 2.1
date: April 30, 2008

It wasn't just OneWhoListens - I almost thought it was a prank loading flash where it says it's loading but never does. The most important thing about a game is being able to play it. I HATE having to sit here for an hour while something loads. I stopped just based on principle. You can see this in older PS1 games too. Judging but what others said, it is likely good, but the loading ruins it. Kinda like controllers for old atari mock systems.
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April 30, 2008

Author's Response:

what could I do about the loading? it have a lot of sounds to load especially that you'll have a whole lot of music in battles.
anyways you should've rated me for the game itself and not for the loading, for most people it takes like a minute or two to load it all.

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Score: 2
dad's killing spree

"Incomplete"

date: April 30, 2008

Take your time, finish the movie. Do not be desperate for attention or criticism. It could be very good if you left it in the oven for a bit longer.
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Score: 8
In Memory of 911

"Good"

submission: In Memory of 911
date: September 18, 2006

Good flash...

You should check snopes .com about the Nostradamus prediction - it's complete fabrication. I don't want anyone getting worried about this type of prediction..

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Score: 10
Bozophilia

"Excellent"

submission: Bozophilia
date: July 19, 2006

Hi,

I want you to know that if you look at my profile, the last review I made was in September 15, 2003. I am making one now, three years later, because I think that this toon is that deserving. You show great talent and I think you should definitely seek employment in the entertainment field - it seems obvious that you are talented and passionate for it.

All I have to say is - good luck in your endeavours.

~

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Score: 1
Madness: A Tribute 2

"Hmph"

date: September 15, 2003

Well that was simply just a rip off and quite boring.

There are too many trailers on New Grounds. If you're gonna make a rip off, at least make it a complete movie.

~ NW.oYm-NO ~

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